The Creature

One day, Lily-May was walking through the park when she saw a creature.  It had yellow eyes, brown shaggy fur, dark green teeth and a thick black tail.  Lily-May was astonished and she decided to take the thing home.

At home, Lily-May gave it some milk and decided to call the thing Bertie.  He followed her to school and everywhere she went Bertie followed her.

One sunny Saturday, Lily-May and Bertie went for a walk in the park.  It was a lovely day for a walk in the park…

The Exsploive egg

Dear future life ,

I’m hoping to race around the egg that if you win it explodes all over the race track however it only comes of if you eat it less then a hour. Suddenly, the egg exploaded on the track even though it was only 96434567898765  more  laps in till the flag came out but in sted the yellow and red strighped flag came out.

“Look out for the egg on the race track “yelled all the racers at the same time. Due to the egg exsplosen the track had egg markes  on any part of the track the race was over for ever.

My Holiday Adventure

It was Friday school had finished it was time for a run at school we were raising money for cancer.Me and My friend Megan were  running together suddenly the whistle went it started eight or four laps of the field Mr. Rockey  said me an meg did eight (breathing) .Finally we got to the end we got a  reward a medal.  My dad took me home it was fun  .

We got home packed our bags and got in the car and seat of to Devon camping we got stuck in a couple of traffic jams however they were no longer than five minutes .Finally we got there my cousins were there. unfortunately after two hours of amazing fun we had to go to bed however it wasn’t to bad because we new that tomorrow would be just as fun .

The next day all of my second cousins on my dads side came down then we had a play got dressed and headed up the camp site to see what was going they were here  yes said Amelia yes I said! Then they put up the tents however the kids let the adults do it all (laughing ) . So today we just stayed at the campsite.

Monday it’s the day the day that I’ve been waiting for eight weeks were going to the back beach it is going to be so much fun we through some things in the car (not literally though) we got there .Jumping of rocks, swimming ,surfing and lots more to do me my dad and Sophie went cannoning and i jumped out and held onto the back of the cannon whilst  it puled me along . Then I nearly got hypothermia because I was so cold .All of the things that I listed i also did.

We got back to the camp and played for hours on end finally it got to half seven we put our pajamas on then played again bear feet  it got to half ten we had to go to bed although it wasn’t to bad because I  was sleeping with Amelia ,Erica,Millie and Sophie . It was fun because we had a midnight feast then we woke up however at half nine in the morning we had to say goodbye too every body. We stayed in till twelve am then we set off to go home.So that Is my fun cool adventure every body.

My Holiday

What a amazing day I had!

On Saturday Albert and I went to my with Mummy to her cousin’s house.

His name is Mark, it was his 60th birthday and retirement party. I saw my second cousins, their names were May, Teddy, Tabatha, Maddy and Archie.

It was as a big garden party he very good at family gatherings. There was a tree house and swings to play on and so much delicious food!

It was the best day of my holiday!

Holiday Writing

For this prompt you can write about your favourite holiday experiences. These can be from the half term coming up or a favourite holiday from the past. Login as usual and create a new post for your writing. Have a lovely week everyone.

Maypole Dancers

The animals are dancing to the cheerful violin music.

They are really happy because it’s May and it’s nearly summer time.

The little mouse is wearing a beautiful red dress and she is watching the dancers, while clapping her teeny, tiny paws in time with the music.

There is a little bird with a bright yellow chest, sitting in the tree chirping, “don’t tangle your ribbons!”

What a lovely, merry time they are having,


The heart forest

Once upon a time there was a family of sweeties who lived in a forist. There was a mummy, daddy, a sister called May and a baby called Alice and they loved each other so much.

In the forest also livd a family of choclut and they loved each other too.

On the trees in the forist wer harts.  The harts made the trees look pritty. One day the hearts fell of the trees and the forist looked sad. It was a disaster. They wer all sad but suddenly the hearts came back again and everyone was happy bcos the forist  looked beootifull again.

They all wonted to go for a walk in the forist to see the luvly hearts and be together.  

by May and Alice

Can you write a story?

This week we would like you to write a story of your own. The story can be about anything you like so be creative, descriptive and make it as interesting as you possibly can. Don’t forget to include all of the punctuation you need!

Marshmallow Land

Once upon a time there was a family of marshmallows. They were very pink. One sunny day they went for a walk. They came to a house made out of gingerbread, sweets, marshmallows, cookies and chocolate. They ate all of the roof and then they were full.

They went inside and they saw a wicked old lady with a very, very, very big green wart on her nose. The old lady wanted to toast the marshmallows on her fire but first she put them in a cage and went to sleep. The marshmallows crept out of the cage by squidging through the gaps and when the wicked lady woke up they were gone.

by May and Alice

5 sentence challenge!

The massive hand is poking out of the ground like it is going to lift the tree to great heights!

I think that hand is a giant weeding his grass (which is the tree to us) so he can surprise his lovely wife.

When it is tea time some fairies slide their slim bodies in through a small crack in the index finger and eat some figs and sausages for tea

But I wonder what’s for dessert?

the giant likes counting out his $1000000000 while singing # Money, Money, Money  must be funny in my castle# over and over again.